Rabbit Hole – Chapter 1 Re-Vamp

So I’ve been meaning to do this for a long time. I have Re-vamped chapter 1 of Tumbling Down the Rabbit Hole, because, well I didn’t like it and haven’t since about chapter 4. Nothing important in the story was changed. Just some detail work, foreshadowing, and just improving the chapter overall. If you decide to not re-read this chapter, that is fine, it doesn’t affect any changes in the story, but I’d be tickled pink to see what you guys think and hear your feedback! And… Kittyinaz, you will laugh at a  change I made with Sookie’s insult to Alan Nut!

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